Hi, good piece but minor problems
I felt like the piano was a little too blunt in its sound at the beginning. It seemed to end too quickly almost, and that hurt the beginning slightly, in my opinion.
Also, some of the background instruments cannot be heard unless by a strained ear, so I think you could work on mixing a bit as well.
Good project, though.
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